最近小咪在 Penana 看稿时,发现了一个极其普遍的通病:很多作品不仅缺乏基本的布景描写,不懂运镜法则,场景调度更是混乱不堪。甚至有的整部小说从头到尾一句布景都没有,角色全在空洞的舞台上对话!...
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最近小咪在 Penana 看稿时,发现了一个极其普遍的通病:很多作品不仅缺乏基本的布景描写,不懂运镜法则,场景调度更是混乱不堪。甚至有的整部小说从头到尾一句布景都没有,角色全在空洞的舞台上对话!...1234 copyright protection290PENANAguC77cbBcT 尼
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