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All about Thoughts
ISSUE #1
Author: 羅瑟
All about Thoughts
Author: 羅瑟
ISSUE #1
Lyrics：When the Sun Goes Down
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This is my very first song!

I have no music background, and English is not my first language

Just want to share it and hope you would like it (even just a bit(๑Ő௰Ő๑))

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When the sun goes down

Standing alone near sea

I can't help this loneliness

Which I've kept indulging in 

Can't confess how I feel

Too afraid I'd lose you

Close my eyes and imagine how

Our fingertips brushing through

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Then I hear your footsteps

Slowly, gently toward me

Can't help but wondering how far is there

This distance between you and me 

Could it be more possibility?

Feel your warmth through our bumping hands

Maybe it’s a hint, maybe I should take a leap

Open eyes, reach out my shaky hands

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When the sun goes down

When the night finally comes

My heart seems to stop and

Tear shed, dropped and fell in 

But then you reach out your hands too

Take mine, and look into my eyes

Tell me you were afraid too

And finally we no longer have to

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We close our eyes

When sun goes down

We close our eyes

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Last updated: Jun 23, 2026
Total word count: 903
Total reading time: 4 Minutes
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