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The Sealed Saviour
ISSUE #11
Author: Muhammad Waqas
The Sealed Saviour
Author: Muhammad Waqas
ISSUE #11
Chapter 6: A long night before Dawn
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The palace gates closed behind them with a deep, echoing groan.

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THUD.

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The sound lingered, like something final. The outside world was gone but the unease remained.

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The convoy moved through the inner courtyard in perfect formation. Boots struck stone in a steady rhythm, armor shifting with each step.

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Clink. Clink. Clink.

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No one spoke. Not a single voice broke the silence.

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Even the servants lowered their heads as the carriage passed, as if afraid to look for too long. Something had happened. Everyone could feel it.

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They just didn’t know what.

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The carriage slowed, then came to a halt.

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The door opened.

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Shin-Zenshu stepped out first.

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Tok.

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The moment his foot touched the ground, the atmosphere changed. It tightened, as if the air itself had been pulled too thin.

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The guards straightened instantly. No one dared meet his eyes.

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Behind him, Shin-Hi stepped out carefully, the child hidden beneath layers of cloth, wrapped tightly against her chest.

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Protected.

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Hidden.

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Forgotten.

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At least… that was the plan.

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“Prepare the inner chamber.”

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His voice was low. Flat. Absolute.

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A nearby Shin-Jin dropped to one knee immediately. “Yes, my lord!”

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Shin-Zenshu didn’t wait. He moved forward, his steps sharp and precise.

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Tok… tok… tok…

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Each step echoed through the palace halls. Servants disappeared into the walls, guards stiffened, and even the torches seemed to burn quieter as he passed.

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Inside the palace, the silence felt different.

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Not empty.

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Controlled.

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Like something was being held back.

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The doors to the main chamber stood ahead massive and closed.

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“Open.”

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The command was quiet, but it struck like force.

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BOOM.

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The doors swung open.

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The chamber beyond was vast and empty for now.

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Shin-Zenshu stepped inside, turned, and sat.

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Not like a king resting.

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Like a blade placed carefully on a table.

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Still.

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But ready.

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“Call the General.”

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A pause.

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“Yes, my lord!”

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Footsteps rushed away.

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Time passed slowly, heavily, deliberately.

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Shin-Hi remained standing at the side, holding the child close. Her fingers hadn’t relaxed even once.

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The newborn still hadn’t cried.

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Not once.

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Not a sound.

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Her eyes lowered slightly.

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“You’re too quiet…”

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The whisper barely existed but it carried fear.

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Then

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Step… step…

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The doors opened again.

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A man entered.

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Tall. Armored. Unshaken.

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General Kazuki.

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He dropped to one knee immediately.

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“My lord.”

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Shin-Zenshu’s gaze locked onto him.

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Sharp. Unmoving.

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“Speak.”

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No greeting. No courtesy.

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Only command.

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Kazuki raised his head slightly.

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“My lord… I have investigated the attack.”

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Silence.

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“It was a group of raiders.”

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Nothing changed.

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Not in Shin-Zenshu’s face.

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Not in his eyes.

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“Desperate,” Kazuki continued carefully. “The Barrier has restricted movement for years. Food shortages… rising population…”

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He chose his words with precision.

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“They saw the carriage. Limited escort. No visible Shin-Jin presence.”

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A pause.

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“They assumed it was a weak target.”

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Silence.

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Deep.

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Unmoving.

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Shin-Zenshu’s fingers shifted slightly against the armrest.

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Just slightly.

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But enough.

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Kazuki felt it.

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“And?” Shin-Zenshu asked.

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One word.

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Heavy.

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Kazuki exhaled slowly.

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“They attacked.”

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Simple.

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Too simple.

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The chamber remained silent, but something changed.

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Subtle.

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Sharp.

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Like a blade being drawn without sound.

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“The Barrier…” Kazuki continued, shifting slightly. “After what happened earlier, the crack has spread further.”

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Shin-Zenshu didn’t react.

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But the air did.

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“The sign of the Saviour…” Kazuki said carefully. “…the world is beginning to change.”

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Still nothing.

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Then

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Tok.

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A single tap of Shin-Zenshu’s finger.

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Soft.

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Final.

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“Leave.”

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Kazuki froze.

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“My lord…?”

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Shin-Zenshu’s eyes lifted slightly.

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Cold.

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Focused.

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“Leave.”

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No explanation.

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No second chance.

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Kazuki bowed immediately. “Yes… my lord.”

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He stood, turned, and walked out.

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Step… step…

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The doors closed behind him.

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BOOM.

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Silence returned.

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Complete.

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For a long moment, no one moved.

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Then slowly, Shin-Zenshu leaned back. His eyes shifted not outward, but inward.

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Raiders.

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Desperation.

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A random attack.

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No.

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His fingers tightened.

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That explanation didn’t fit.

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Too clean.

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Too convenient.

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Too weak.

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Someone knew.

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His eyes darkened.

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“Find them…”

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The whisper barely left his lips.

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But it carried intent.

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Deadly intent.

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“Whoever they are…”

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The rest remained unspoken.

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But the meaning was clear.

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This wasn’t over.

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Not even close.

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Shin-Hi finally moved.

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Her gaze lifted toward him.

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“You don’t believe him…”

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It wasn’t a question.

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“No.”

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A pause.

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“He believes it.”

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Her breath caught.

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“Then?”

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“Someone made sure he would.”

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Silence fell again.

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Heavy.

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Her grip around the child tightened.

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A new fear settled in.

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Not of enemies outside

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But of something closer.

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Hidden.

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Watching.

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The palace was not safe.

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Far beyond the walls, the world had already begun to shift. Deep forests stirred. Creatures moved where nothing had moved for centuries.

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The air itself carried a faint, unfamiliar pressure.

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Shin-Noa…

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Was changing.

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Back inside, Shin-Zenshu stood slowly.

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Deliberately.

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The chamber felt smaller around him.

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More suffocating.

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“Strengthen internal security.”

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His voice cut through the silence.

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“Double the watch.”

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A pause.

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“No one moves without my knowledge.”

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A guard appeared instantly.

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“Yes, my lord!”

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Shin-Zenshu turned slightly.

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His gaze moved just briefly

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To the child.

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Still silent.

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Still fragile.

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Still alive.

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Five years.

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His eyes hardened.

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“I will not lose him.”

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The words were quiet.

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But absolute.

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Outside, the night deepened. The palace lights burned steadily.

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But beyond the walls

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Darkness stretched endlessly.

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And somewhere within it

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Something was watching.

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Waiting.

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The long night had only just begun..

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