Chapter I — The Body Remembers
Forty years of hauling sofa beds leave you with two things: a fierce loyalty to rest, and a map of aches your body no longer needs to explain. After retiring from the furniture store—the same one where I started as a delivery driver and ended as general manager—I realized that retirement wasn’t rest; it was negotiation. I had to learn how to move all over again inside a worn-out body.
That’s why I joined the most prestigious gym in the neighborhood. I wasn’t looking for discipline; I was looking for relief. The place had everything you expect when you pay top dollar: stainless steel, low-key music, screens glowing in front of young people running toward nothing at all. I tried the machines with patience and good faith, but soon understood they weren’t made for me anymore. Only the water welcomed me without reproach. Only in the pool did anything feel right.
For three months, I swam every day. Always at the same hour. The water became routine, and the routine became a modest form of happiness.
Until one Tuesday, around two in the afternoon, I arrived at the gym and found a notice taped to the front door. It was printed, but someone had scribbled notes in the margins, as if things had gotten worse after it went up:7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4zQuKzlCGY
"Due to a gas leak detected on the premises, the pool will remain closed until further notice. Showers have no hot water, and locker room access is limited."
The reopening was uncertain—it could take days… weeks… or even longer. Below, in smaller print, a solution was offered: an affiliated gym fifteen miles away had a pool available.
Gas leaks don’t usually announce themselves with ellipses. But I had no choice. That same day, I drove to the other side of the city.
The gym was fine—functional, soulless. After swimming, I was changing at an unhurried pace when I noticed the locker next to mine was occupied by an older Asian man. His movements were slow and precise. He dried his feet with a thin towel, as if time didn’t weigh on him. We exchanged a few words without hurry, the way retirees do: old pains, stubborn joints, a body that no longer answers the way it used to.
When I told him where I’d come from, he frowned.7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡACZI3ipGbq
“Goodness… coming from that far,” he murmured. “Maybe you’d be better off trying another place.”
He lowered his voice—not out of secrecy, but out of habit.7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXEHTigzjPg
“Not many people know it exists. I only know the stories.”
I asked him what he meant.7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqxg7NGzFjI
“Valdemont,” he said, as if the name carried weight. “My grandparents talked about it when I was a boy. Before the neighborhood fell apart. Before the refineries. They said it used to be an elegant spa; people came in by train from the city. There were hotels, cafés, dance halls… The refineries swallowed everything, and then the train stopped coming.”
He paused, then added:7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpig8FFTmFv
“They said one pool remained. A big one. Indoors. The oil company built it to compensate for the smell in the air. A ‘hangar of light,’ they called it…”
“If it still exists… it’s the only place where the water has no owner.”
Those memories weren’t his. We said goodbye without exchanging names. I never saw him again.
That night, as I drove home, Valdemont began to settle into an uncomfortable corner of my mind. I knew the name, of course, but had always thought of it as a place you pass through, not a destination. Refineries sprawling like cities within the city. Punished streets. A heavy air that clung to your clothes.
A place no one goes to by choice. Or at least, that’s what I believed.
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Chapter II — Valdemont
The next day, I drove toward Valdemont, feeling as if I were chasing a ghost. The city was deteriorating before my eyes: avenues that had once been elegant now showed cracked facades, faded signs, and broken windows. A thick, metallic air clung to my throat and hair, reminding me that I was entering a world that seemed to have stopped, and in doing so, had consumed everything.
The building I was looking for promised nothing. A tired rectangle, with walls that looked like they had survived too many bad decisions. I passed through the rusted door and found myself in a narrow, low, poorly lit corridor. It smelled of dampness and dust—of prolonged abandonment. Every step echoed.
An interior courtyard hinted at ancient attempts at beauty: a broken mosaic, a worn iron bench. The weight room was tiny, as if modernity had forgotten that corner entirely. The men's locker room looked like a graveyard of yellowed tiles and broken locks. Nothing suggested that anything other than decay could exist there.
At the far end, a long, dark hallway led to a heavy metal door. I hesitated for a moment, feeling like I was crossing an invisible threshold. I pushed the door open, and as it gave way, I had to close my eyes for a second: the light hit me—intense and white, steady, almost surgical.
When I opened them, there was no warehouse or abandoned room. There was a hangar of water. A monumental structure of black steel and translucent glass that seemed to have been teleported from another century. The soaring ceiling filtered the daylight, creating a steady glow that turned every line and angle into perfect geometry.
The pool rested in the center like an obsidian mirror. Its lanes, straight and silent, gave the impression that someone had measured every detail with a ruler and compass. Everything was calculated: railings, edges, light reflections. The contrast with the dark hallway I’d left behind was brutal, almost offensive in its perfection. For a moment, I felt as though I’d stepped into a hidden miracle, an act of absurd kindness in the midst of neglect.
At the edge, an elderly lifeguard watched over the water. His hands—gnarled and stiff—betrayed his age, but his gaze was firm, vigilant. I said nothing; neither did he. We just existed there, observing each other like guardians of an impossible secret.
I swam slowly, feeling each stroke as if I were reconciling with my body. Every movement confirmed that this place shouldn't exist... and yet, there it was, breathing and functioning, ignoring the outside world and its logic.
I dressed in silence in the yellow-tiled locker room, my skin still tingling from the water. As I walked out toward the lobby to head back to the street, the receptionists—two cheerful girls who seemed wildly out of place in that mausoleum—stood up and smiled at me, as if celebrating my return from a long journey.
“Come back soon!” they said, almost in unison. “It’s a pleasure to have you here!”
Their laughter echoed off the high ceilings, a fresh sound that seemed to mock all the rust and smoke waiting for me outside. I drove back home with the sense that something in me had shifted. I knew I’d be back, even if I had to cross the entire city. I only hoped the place would still be there next time. It was enough to understand that, for an instant, I had floated in a fragment of the world that seemed to exist outside of time.
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Chapter III — The Anomaly
I returned to Valdemont several times over the following weeks. Each visit became a ritual: I drove through streets that smelled of smoke and metal, crossed deserted avenues, guided only by memory. I swam in silence, feeling the water absorb my years, my aches, and the weight I had carried on my shoulders for a lifetime. Each stroke was a sigh from the past, a moment of clarity in the middle of the city’s chaos.
Each time, the elderly lifeguard watched me from his tall canvas chair without saying a word. His presence was enough—a reminder that some places don’t need words to exist. We shared a sacred silence, quietly guarding the water and our solitude.
When my regular gym reopened, I tried to return to the routine of polished machines, white towels, and soft music. But the water there did not carry the weight of a miracle; it lacked the gravity of Valdemont. Every session felt hollow—too close, too familiar. In the end, nostalgia won. A month later, I drove back toward the hangar.
But this time, the city greeted me with indifference. The building was closed. The metal door had been welded shut, the windows covered in graffiti. There was no sign, no trace of the girls at the front desk, not a single indication that anyone had stepped inside that place for years. I asked a newsstand vendor on the corner:7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWc4Dmivb0O
“Excuse me—the pool in the hangar?”7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGE1EM5Bt7b
He looked at me as if I were speaking another language.7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCwow10Nl5X
“Pool?” he said with a tired laugh. “There’s nothing in there but rust and scrap, boss. That place has been closed forever.”7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwzSbWbA3DN
The echo of his answer struck me.7Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKaz1KgpRzH
Valdemont—the miracle of steel and light—was not a place one could return to at will. It was a fragment of time, open to those who needed it and closed when they no longer did. A place that existed only while someone inhabited it.
As I drove back, I understood that the pool had never been just water. It was a reminder—an impossible gesture life had offered me: that after years of measuring life by its weight, I could still float. That even in the most battered places, a trace of clarity could remain. That chance—a locker occupied by a stranger—could open doors I hadn’t known I needed to cross.
There are pools that cannot be seen from the outside. Invisible pools that open like cracks in reality when the air becomes unbreathable… and seal themselves without a trace once the soul regains its balance.
Valdemont stayed with me not as a place, but as an anomaly: something remembered, revisited, reread. One of those strange moments that cannot be repeated, yet reminds us that even when the body is heavy, there is still a way to float—if only for a moment outside of time.
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