First, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my work. Even if it is flawed, I will do better in time; I just have to get there! On reflection, it seems I favored too many side characters, and the story lost its focus, and it hurt the overall plot. Still learning good story beats and plot progression. I did not have outside feedback, so I don't mind anyone who posts their view, as I will keep it in mind to get better.
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I wrote this novel with AI assistance, but the story was 100% me. I have since read about others who have done the same and never used the tag since AI is taboo and frowned upon.
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Trust me, the way the AI tried to take my story was 100% different; it only had two gods, Abaddon, who was much darker, and the climax was a random child saving Abaddon, making him more gray than dark and a balanced god when he broke free from dark.
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Some of the feedback from AI kept saying I need to "cut" things, and at first I listened, but I hated how everything felt blunted. Sadly, maybe I lack insight into what good storytelling is and what good writing is vs. my version, which is why later chapters may feel more drawn out or random in where they go, as I was doing my own thing and only using AI for plot holes or clarity when it said a scene made no sense or lacked context vs. letting it cut down my writing for "better" effect.
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I pay nothing for AI, so I'm limited in what info they give before the "you hit your use for the day," so I tried to keep it simple and on point to tell the story. I don't use AI for plots or writing scenes. That is partly why my writing is so slow or seems random in where it goes, and I don't know if anything I write is really that good.
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I wrote about 5 chapters of a comedy/drama litRPG last hope inn but got stuck feeling like the plot was moving a bit fast and also did not want to drag the plot out, so I kind of stopped writing it (for now). Then I loved the random comments I would get on another site about potions and dreams and did not like that I left Nina's arc so tragic when I already had plans for what would happen next.
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Adding to it, I even got an idea for a new book—just a rough outline so far—about a blind girl summoned by a fairy into a world as a pet, and the fairy trying to heal her with mana water almost kills her since she never had mana in her body. That was going to be the super drawn-out one. I experimented with what happens when I am not trying to keep a novel at 130k words and really try to draw out the plot, not with word padding but with depth of scene and slow building of events learning magic.
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Then I started a new book with a death loop start, being pawns in a game to a trickster god. It is my current focus; only a couple of chapters are done, so I am still working on new things even if they seem like random or pointless stories, just exploring writing and learning to write better.
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As before, thank you for reading. I may write slowly but am not going anywhere (knock on wood), so I will have more books in time, and hopefully I will get better. I enjoy storytelling and want to entertain and show people new worlds of what could be, so between now and whenever, if you stumble across anything written by me, hopefully I inspired you as others have done to me.
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And if I came close to something good but fell flat, I will listen and try to learn new tricks as an old dog so that you keep wanting to see what comes next from me.13Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQwPG80A0Xk
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