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[你揀我寫]一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運
ISSUE #128
Author: 黑犬風易
[你揀我寫]一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運
Author: 黑犬風易
ISSUE #128
B. 問徐一一意見
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【本篇有獎勵！

​​​​​​​大家記得睇文之餘俾個Like！】

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我望向徐一一。

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「你可唔可以幫下我？王君婷話你好專業。」我有少少唔好意思咁講。

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徐一一好似有啲意外我會問佢意見。

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不過佢聽到我敢問之後，就走咗埋嚟，上上下下前前後後摸吓我個頭，然後就同我講：「你嘅髮質偏軟，而且好厚，再加上面形都尖尖地，其實可以試吓『透薄』，然後再將前面嘅陰剪返斜少少，咁就可以令到個頭有返啲層次。同埋都可以試吓做返個undercut，睇落個人會精神啲。」

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今次因為佢同我企到好近，我終於成功聽到晒佢講嘅每一句說話。

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其實佢講一大堆嘢呢我都唔係好明，但係我就將呢番說話全部講晒比林明禎聽。

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林明禎聽完，有啲欣賞咁望向徐一一：「妹妹，你都幾有眼光喎。」

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徐一一聽到有人讚佢，好自然咁樣耷低咗頭。

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林明禎寫低咗我哋嘅要求之後，就叫我哋坐低等一等。

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等咗一輪，我就見到林明禎向我招手，似乎我終於可以走入去布幕後面。

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一諗到我可以同林明禎兩個人喺布幕後面共處一室，仲要俾佢按摩個頭，成件事真係好興奮。

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入到去，我坐低咗喺剪頭髮張凳上面，林明禎幫我被上咗一件袍，然後佢轉身就走。

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「咦，你唔係幫我剪頭髮嘅咩？」我好奇咁問。

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「我？我負責收錢㗎咋，邊識剪頭髮。剪頭髮嘅係我阿媽！」林明禎一邊笑，一邊離開咗。

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呢個時候，有一個姨姨喺唔知邊度走咗出嚟。

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佢個樣，唔太友善。

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「坐定定，而家幫你剪頭髮。」阿姨把聲就好似我阿媽一樣，好有威嚴。

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聽到佢呢句嘢，我又真係唔敢再郁。

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如是者，我就咁剪咗個頭。

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望翻鏡，我發現自己好似變咗另一個人咁。

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精神咗，端正咗，睇落無咁易俾人打。

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而家我個髮型由一舊嘢，變咗做咁樣。

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而重點係，咁出色嘅手勢，都只係收我 $70。

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我帶住非常滿意嘅心情離開，就連平時好冷靜嘅王君婷見到我，佢都定咗一定，然後講：「髮型，原來真係好重要，你終於似翻個人。」

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而佢身邊嘅徐一一點一點頭，臉上掛住咗一個滿意嘅笑容。

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離開髮型屋，王君婷佢哋似乎都準備走。

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記憶中，徐一一同我住得好近，如果咁計，我哋應該會一齊行。

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但係我同佢唔係太熟，一齊行會唔會有啲尷尬呢？

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【選擇時間】各位巴打絲打，我應該點做好呢？

（因為達到2,700likes，開放作者視角作為提示）

A. 邀請王君婷一齊走（會遭到王君婷拒絕，同時觸發徐一一尷尬）1181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRPjdSd0VO6
B. 同徐一一同行（拉近徐一一關係）1181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ884K0Si1by
C. 搵個理由，然後自己走（平常之選，沒有特別觸發點）1181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw1TIQ5QdPa
D. 話要食晚飯，自己留低（增強主角孤單感，但亦可以增加對銅鑼灣餐廳認識）

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​​​​​​​（請在留言處留下你的選擇，

最快有留言達到四票將會成為故事發展的後續，

假如平手，將會以較快一票作為標準，

歡迎大家在留言區先討論再作選擇！）

（如在15：30前未夠票數，故事將自動由作者續寫）

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每天大約2-3個劇情，但到達獎勵目標，將可以幫助故事增加更新速度/打開各種隱藏資料！所以睇故事之餘，大家記得Like哂每一篇故事啊！

下一個獎勵目標：3300 likes

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以下是我的IG帳戶，大家有興趣可以去到那邊催促我更新，而且還有這個故事的「作者前言」！1181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwAcwSCuwLM
IG : windblowssilently

默颺讀者交流TG group：https://t.me/+jD_eY63Yb5I0MmQ1

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[你揀我寫]一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運
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Last updated: Jan 22, 2024
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