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Looking for an honest feedback: would you continue reading?
Lera Sycamore
#1
Hi! I really need some honest feedback and would appreaciate your help. Please read here and let me know what you think! Feel free to point out whatever you like, I'm pretty thick-skinned and want to improve. Do your worst!

https://www.penana.com/story/202487/the-scum-warlord-stabbed-me-in-the-back/
3 months agoReply
FIREXASH
@Lera Sycamore,i just read the first chapter and it was really good.keep it up..✨
3 months agoReply
Evelyn Polish
@Lera Sycamore, I would love to help you beta read your book. I focus on things like plot, pacing, dialogue and character dialogue.
2 months agoReply
Jaeden literary
#2
Hey, let me check it out
3 months agoReply
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