I am currently writing the first of a probably-two-parter novel called Pawns: The Tale of Wilhelm/Wilhelm's Tale (I named it the second on Wattpad, but for some reason apostrophes are coded weirdly in the Penana site.)

I am a leisure writer, and I am slowly trying to build up my world to give it a mix of political intrigue and textbook fantasy stuff, with a mix of tragedy elements. Has mature language, so discretion advised.

I have published 4 chapters as of now, around 8k words I reckon. Lemme know your honest opinions, especially about how pacy it is, or if it needs more dialogue, anything of that sort.

If you'd like me to do a read-for-read, I am up for it too (however it might be a little hard for me to completely catch up if it has like 20 chapters :))

Thanks!

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