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白凌
這個廁所的設計🤣走錯情有可原
1 week agoReply
夜沐
小聲說真有其廁🤡
1 week agoReply
夜沐
稍微提及一下，優可篇與三重篇的時間軸，可能在某些地方稍微有ＢＵＧ，這部分是因為我的劇本中並沒有明確提及時間點（都只講大概），加上很多橋段是原劇本沒有的加戲，只有隱約記錄事情的先後順序。

此外多視角同步進行要檢查的地方非常多，有時間軸ＢＵＧ的片段我會陸續記錄下來，但可能還是會有漏掉的地方，如果有發現也歡迎告訴我。

而這個問題於最終的正式文庫版我會列出時間軸，再對照時間軸整部作品重新編排與潤飾，就能避免這個問題，現階段請大家多多包容🥹
1 week agoReply
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