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孤蒼寰
大大寫的故事都很注重細節，從買包子的價錢、到軍營人數的推算方式、還有這邊新同伴加入的具體理由都很詳細，應該是規劃了很久了吧
1 month agoReply
Triple C
大大好，小弟還是菜鳥，經不起這聲“大大” 😆
這個故事已經在我的腦海裏多年了，如今才付諸行動把他實現出來，但大大舉的這三個例子，都是邊寫遍想出來的，要說的話小弟真的很喜歡寫故事的感覺，也希望寫出來的故事邏輯自洽，沒有太多明顯的漏洞。也感謝大大一路支持！🤩
1 month agoReply
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