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竹爧
輕輕抓住了理人還放在她頭上的那隻「手的」手腕。

我認為可以剛掉「手的」，「輕輕抓住了理人還放在她頭上的那隻手腕」就足夠表達了，「手的手腕」有些累贅。
4 weeks agoReply
洛々ka
感謝建議！現在已經修改好了。
4 weeks agoReply
Rika 醬
突然有個女兒，還不知道母親是誰，壓力山大呀
1 month agoReply
洛々ka
可能會有人搶這個位置？
1 month agoReply
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