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想法隨時可以改變,正如一開始未有人訂閱,想寫嘅都係會寫。
至於內容意見,個人覺得學校篇>醫院篇>異世界篇好似太快,咩都未建立到,南宮家、孤狼呢啲組織擺低咗,就誤入咗異世界。咁呢一刻個期望就覺得主角之後返到原本世界,都無咩好做,實力經歷完異世界都變得無敵XD (暫時諗到呢啲,棄故係無問題,講聲就好,哈哈)