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孤蒼寰
武林教科書……敢情是文明書房出版的嗎？

話說劇情難得把第一美人逼哭了，怎麼不考慮多花些文墨去寫淒美感?
第一美人的淒美，足夠可以讓眾人呆住停手，這才是顛倒眾生的美貌嘛
1 month agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
XD，就是那個意思啦，大家都認同的境界敘述的意思。

關於淒美感的部分，折腰的想法是這樣的：

我輩江湖兒女，豈能哭哭啼啼，有什麼事情，等殺完人以後再說XDD。

再描述下去，就有水字數的嫌疑了（其實是我不會描述XD）。
1 month agoReply
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