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Moonlit_irina
 Zenjiro wakes up and everything turns from chaos into quiet, and you can feel his fear still lingering under the surface. The way his thoughts spiral into that “was it real?” doubt felt so intense and human, like I was holding my breath with him. :))
1 month agoReply
PRIDE
Indeed, I'm honored that you have found such a scene to be captivating. That is why I take time crafting these kinds of chapters for readers like you! 

Stay tuned for any upcoming chapters.

And sorry for any kind of delay. I am an individual who is plagued with procrastination.
1 month agoReply
Moonlit_irina
It's alright and thank you for such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :)))@PRIDE,
1 month agoReply
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