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黑心小兔
這段劇情寫的真好!
1 week agoReply
朝花夕拾
謝謝小兔！回顧以往，馬球這段真的是自己從想像的動作戲落實到文字，真的好難好難啊，但完成的時候，也很有成就感。原來自己真的可以做到～感謝妳！
6 days agoReply
林谷龍
我猜錯了，是脩贏了。

峘也坦率磊落，願賭服輸，將銀晝送出。
脩不奪人所好，事後返還，兩人都是謙謙君子。
2 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
谷龍兄也磊落😆😆
2 months agoReply
林谷龍
@朝花夕拾,多謝誇講。
2 months agoReply
若棱
很喜歡花花對球賽的描述www
特有畫面感（而且很趙脩很帥啊啊啊好喜歡他輕如流水的動作
4 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
444 我也覺此處脩哥很帥啊
阿凝根本當偶像崇拜
4 months agoReply
執一
子峘雖然無禮，但感覺也是個率直大方的人，而且言出必行，加上是代國王族，算是個人物呢！
4 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
是啊是啊，算是坦蕩蕩的人物呢～
4 months agoReply
原子能
妹妹的眼神就是最好的獎勵！『那眼神中滿滿的崇拜表露無遺，惹得他心中竟也有些飄飄然的。』
6 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
聽說男生最招架不住女生崇拜？！
6 months agoReply
原子能
@朝花夕拾,嗯嗯，動畫也是這麼演的。
6 months agoReply
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