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RiYu
好看！(*☻-☻*)
係想快啲睇下集嘅感覺
3 weeks agoReply
RICE
趕工中！
3 weeks agoReply
RiYu
@RICE, (*⁰▿⁰*)
3 weeks agoReply
德川總長 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 43!
邊撚個神水鳩姚遠再墜輪迴既，我起度買兇叫作者殺佢！
4 weeks agoReply
德川總長
神巧妙地迴避了「為啥有人不用努力且無惡不作也能天生獲得無限福報」的問題，並且順勢將姚遠遊說成替神辦事的工具人！

屌你老母你班神族果然高撚招！神族會用「自己製造出黎既問題」美化成「俾人實踐美德既機會」的謊言！神族果然係無個好人！都是偽善的偽君子！

如果我係姚遠，我會拒絕接受試煉，並且屠殺鳩哂班神族！屌你老母你班偽君子！又想引誘我去玩輪迴俾系統控制！我係自由既靈魂！我唔會俾系統再操控！
4 weeks agoReply
RICE
神唔在乎人類個體嘅感受，同埋願望有冇實現其實好模稜兩可😂
4 weeks agoReply
德川總長
@RICE,人類畢竟只是宇宙病夫……
4 weeks agoReply
大菊翔平 sponsored 5000coins for Issue 43!
呢集好好睇，唔係講笑
雖然知道你寫劇本時係有用GPT幫手
但係利維質問神嘅事
真係好有廿歲後生仔諗法
而神明嘅回答雖然有啲AI味
但其實入面有啲成熟氣質喺入面
1 month agoReply
RICE
多謝鍾意，今集劇本冇用ai潤色的，係本人文筆太ai
1 month agoReply
大菊翔平
@RICE, 咁搞笑，可能係我諗多咗
4 weeks agoReply
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