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凌步
來了！我感覺浪漫的談情說愛快要來了！
喔，我剛發現在心得文裡忘了說，折腰用代名詞/借代都用得很俐落，例如晶瑩、庸脂俗粉、玉人⋯⋯許多許多的，古典又有味道。
5 months agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
謝謝！其實我的作品中，對美女的形容來去都是那樣，真的很難形容所謂的「美女」。
死直男寫的談情說愛，真的不要期待太多（羞），不過希望妳會喜歡那種幼稚又可笑的甜蜜。
5 months agoReply
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