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筆墨
... 多重人格能用嗎?
1 month agoReply
不知餘
感覺作品好像都符合大大所說的群像—蒙太奇手法推進也是必備。

第一人稱像群像也非群像的，我知道有個意識像超能力一樣，可以隨時跳轉到他視線範圍的人身上附身，該人死掉又會跳出去（但可變成該人，有可能忘記自己是誰）；自己本身肉體好像是實體轉虛進入他人身體，出來時又是虛體轉實⋯⋯實則不還是第一人稱嗎？作者自己要很清楚不混亂，超考驗能力的
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
第一人称，说白了，连自己都无法刻画，除非站在镜子前，怎么刻画别的人呢，只能是我看起来他如何帅，她如何漂亮，她穿了一件裙子，他穿了一套笔挺的西服。

1 month agoReply
小啾咪
刻画角色不在于外表，而是整个弧光，而弧光是一个完整过程，不是静态描写。
1 month agoReply
許笑笑
@小啾咪,值得想像一下
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
@許笑笑,
想象什么呢？构建场景吗？💕
1 month agoReply
許笑笑
@小啾咪,建構第一人稱，怎麼描繪呀
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
@許笑笑, 那就建议看看关于视角章节，有稍微提及哦
1 month agoReply
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