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AlbertWesker988

Thank you so much, Emma! I’m really glad you enjoyed this chapter and the way Banner’s connection to the Primordial Core slowly unfolded. 😊
I think the scene I connected with the most was Banner’s awakening and the moment the seven elements began responding to him. I wanted that scene to feel powerful, mysterious, and a little overwhelming—not just for Banner, but for the readers as well.
And honestly, Aria’s arrival was one of the scenes I had the most fun writing. There’s definitely more behind her appearance, and I’m excited to reveal it little by little. 👀
Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts! I hope you’ll enjoy what’s coming next. ❤️

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Emma

I really enjoyed the way this chapter slowly revealed Banner’s connection to the Primordial Core and the seven elements it made the whole awakening feel really exciting. The underground ruins, the mysterious cloaked warriors, and Aria’s arrival created a great sense of mystery and made me want to know what happens next. While you were writing this chapter, was there a particular character or scene you found yourself connecting with the most?

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