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victoria1jhon1

Hi, I’m really impressed by your writing and storytelling skills. How long have you been writing?

6 days agoReply

manny

That genuinely means a lot, thank you. I’ve been writing since I was a kid, but recently I’ve been trying to grow into it more and make my work feel more mature and purposeful. Still learning, but I love it.

5 days agoReply

victoria1jhon1

@manny,
oh you are very experince writer btw how old are you ? and are you active on any social like discord and instgram ?

4 days agoReply

manny

@victoria1jhon1, Haha I wouldn’t call myself experienced yet , I’ve just been writing for a long time. And yeah, I do have IG/socials.

21 hours agoReply

Moonlit_irina

I love this :)), my favorite part is when Ari realizes the Terido’s pattern isn’t magic at all, just something he can read, and then he and Kentaro absolutely synchronize to shut the threat down. The tension, the sprint, the barrier break, the sign strike… it all felt so cinematic and satisfying.

1 week agoReply

manny

Ahh thank you 😭 That scene is one of my favorites too. Ari finally getting to prove his value through observation instead of brute force was really important to me, and pairing that with Kentaro’s power felt like the first time they truly clicked as a team. I’m so glad the tension and action landed for you.

1 week agoReply

Moonlit_irina

Hehehe yeahh I love it :)), thank you for such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :)))@manny,

1 week agoReply

manny

@Moonlit_irina, If you’re open to it, would you mind sharing your email or Discord so we can stay in touch? No worries at all if not!

5 days agoReply

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