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原子能

【其他的"教"給我們】錯字=>其他的"交"給我們
【"季樰"剛剛混入了門衛隊伍】誰=>"季樰"是誰？？
1 month agoReply
羽璇
還好大大有把前世寫出來！這段配合的真好
夜翎打鬥那段好帥，短短幾個字但很順！想像得出來一槍爆頭的帥氣跟俐落感！
太棒惹～
7 months agoReply
凜冬
謝謝羽璇～我當時其實只想寫大概三章，結果順著著寫下去就變成八章了www
7 months agoReply
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