Comments - 【魚魚創挑第十三期】2025春闈大會考 | Penana

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Comments - 【魚魚創挑第十三期】2025春闈大會考 | Penana

Comments - 【魚魚創挑第十三期】2025春闈大會考

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評分：Ａ

寥寥數筆的精鍊字句
卻能將春泥寫出淋漓盡致
可見寫詩的技巧
非常熟練

1 week agoReply

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2 weeks agoReply

謝謝*\(^o^)/*

2 weeks agoReply

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2 weeks agoReply

謝謝*\(^o^)/*

2 weeks agoReply

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看到第二句沒有七，

覺得有點強迫症想湊剛好呀QQ

文字非常有畫面唷!

2 weeks agoReply

謝謝評語(〃∀〃)我再想想要怎麼改，我也覺得少一個字很不舒服www

2 weeks agoReply

大大覺得「霜華」前面加一個「舊」字怎麼樣？會顯得很冗嗎？🤔

2 weeks agoReply

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2 weeks agoReply

謝謝*\(^o^)/*

2 weeks agoReply

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