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Devor 白棘
本篇在11/14重製
因為原內容解說感太重決定重寫一次
也加強了家威與羅巧雯兩人之間的情感交流
有在11/14之前閱讀過的懇請再抽空重讀一次
造成不便我感到很抱歉
1 month agoReply
熊兒
完食～細膩很多👍

家威原地踏步那邊讓我腦海浮現遊戲卡bug ，人只會各種角度原地踏步的畫面哈哈哈哈
1 month agoReply
Devor 白棘
@熊兒, www這形容的真好
果然太複雜的東西還是要拆開來寫
1 month agoReply
熊兒
！是包含整個故事完結嗎？
我剛剛好像也被傳教了，現在思路一片清和（X）
1 month agoReply
Devor 白棘
是呀
但愈接近終點就愈發現各種之前沒考慮到的問題
每天都在腦力激盪
嗯～
開始考慮關於末法之門是不是等下一部再說
感覺是不是解說性太重呢～
1 month agoReply
熊兒
@Devor 白棘,還不知道內容，會不會資訊量有點大(?) 我終於也要等到這部的結局了Q_Q 有點捨不得~
1 month agoReply
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