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九言 sponsored 100coins for Issue 16!
沒什麼錢，但作者真的很用心，支持一下！
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
小咪都要睡了，被金币的脆响吸引了呢~感谢大神投喂小咪~谢谢~贴贴蹭蹭~好开心~祝您好人好梦~一切顺遂！💕💕
1 month agoReply
周狂
鈎子我喜歡寫環境氣氛
不會用旁白說明
事件的推動交由角色的眼
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
看情况啦~如果是比较宏大的小说，旁白会有厚重感哦~
1 month agoReply
藍池淑淑 sponsored 500coins for Issue 16!
學海無涯
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
哇哇~感谢大大打赏投喂~小咪会继续努力~！🎉🙏🎉
1 month agoReply
afuy
可能因為我是純興趣，我只會考慮一個場景結尾該怎麼收，像是留尾韻，下個感動或笑翻的結語，再不行讓角色講個場面話結束。懸念也不一定到尾端才放，整段可以慢慢鋪陳。
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
说的很有道理呢~钩子是钩子，悬念是服务于整体叙事，钩子服务于额外增加读者翻看下一章节的动机。
1 month agoReply
蝶問周
我現在正好寫到第十章，也正巧看到這篇🤣
那看來我理解的鉤子沒有太大偏差
1 month agoReply
小啾咪
~哈哈~英雄所见略同呢🤣
1 month agoReply
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