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Marygrace

Abyss leaps through lightning and flame toward Achlys, his fist crackling blue and yellow as she hovers in the air, holding a blazing, unstable orb of red, white, and black fire between her hands.

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Lenore Corvinae

Kame.. hame..ha!

5 months agoReply

Marygrace

wdym?@Lenore Corvinae,

5 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

@Marygrace, Kamehameha is a Dragon Ball reference.

5 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

It's a charged attack where you blast energy at your oponent

5 months agoReply

Marygrace

Haha yes, I caught that! The Kamehameha reference instantly made me think of Goku powering up 🔥 It added a fun touch to the scene. @Lenore Corvinae,

5 months agoReply

Marygrace

I’d really like to hear more about your story. Should we keep our chat going on Discord or through email? @Lenore Corvinae,

5 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

@Marygrace, i'd be willing to keep talking about the story, but forgive me for being cautious.

The last few times I opened things up to a Discord chat about Night of Flames, people were trying to get me to commission art. I don't have money, so if that's what this is about.

Otherwise, I'm cool answering questions and chatting

5 months agoReply

Della Joy

You wrote it really well, this an amazing story!^^

8 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

Thank you! Any critiques? I'm trying to get it to publishing level.

8 months agoReply

Della Joy

@Lenore Corvinae, Oh that's cool, Can i get any of your social so i can share my with you?

8 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

@Della Joy, sure thing! My Discord is @kiraklaw
https://discord.gg/P2eagpzP

8 months agoReply

Della Joy

@Lenore Corvinae, I have sent you a request check it out!

8 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

Tysm, and remember, this is just the first draft! I'm probably gonna take this one down soon. I don't want too many people reading it so there's no hype or desire to purchase with the finished draft when it comes around.

5 months agoReply

Della Joy

@Lenore Corvinae, Umm i'm so sorry i don't understand wdym?

5 months agoReply

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