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j.L.Skirvin

Your writing is maturing since the early chapters~ I must admit I got quit hooked into your "healing process" storyline curious to see your story comes to final resolution.

10 years agoReply

KingIllumination

Story: 8/10 you really have me wondering what's going on.
Characters: 9/10 Very lovely cast of chars you have here, each with their own story and they aren't cliche.

I give this a 8 /10 overall so far, keep up the good work.

10 years agoReply

books_are_amazing1999

Thank you!I really love your comments :D and I will take everything you said to make it better. I'm going to try to finish it then I'm going to go back through and do some major editing with what I've been told needs worked on

10 years agoReply

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