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Jayden eating the Umbras and healing from them intrigued me 😲. I loved reading the fight scene too btw, it's really good!

Well done, Tenshi 😁

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Jayden eating those things will cause a lot more harm than good later on though.....

4 years agoReply

Awesome chapter Tenshi! ^-^ I love long chapters. The fight with Four was epic and I got a bit nauseous myself at the scene eating an umbra XP Nice one Tenshi!
Small correction, Iggy is knocked out from using his powers so I was kind of surprised to see him awake and talking. O-O Plus with the small umbras within the pillar, I thought any creature would avoid going near the pillar, not to mention entering. Or did I miss a detail? ^-^'

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

I will make the appropriate changes later today. Sorry about that and glad you enjoyed the chapter😊

4 years agoReply

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