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Awesome chapter Ciro ^-^
The magical eye is cool and its function. Makes me all the more curious what happens next with Van.
The singing/shrieking rose monster is awesome and Iggy burns himself... damn! 😣 had to laugh how Talon tries to aid him with mini band-aids. Was imagining pics of Batman of Superman on those band-aids 🤣

4 years agoReply

Thanks! I have so many ideas for monsters and I hope I write to them in well. Have them be magical adds some "spice" to it, I think :D. And yeah, I was imagining the same thing for the bandaids lol

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

I already said it before but I LOVE a long chapter! This was action packed and I enjoyed the interactions immensely.
I giggled the most at them eating twinkies though. The bandage bit was cute too. The man beast gave me FMA vibes that I would want no part of and the songstress sounded really cool. I couldnt help but imagine a mix between a banshee and Poison Ivy 😅
I am curious though. Did this take place during the fighting/after the explosion or is this after Talon manages to transport everyone away? Thats the only real confusion I had with this chapter

4 years agoReply

Thanks! Oh yeah, this is after the fighting after the explosion and after Talon transports them to the coliseum pillar(Van mentions if Ignatius is tired from his transformation in the beginning if the chapter). This follows a few hours after the end of Ig's POV in the previous chapter.

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@Ciro, I see. Now Im curious to where I should start my chapter then. Before or after?

4 years agoReply

@Tenshi no Yami, You can write what Jayden does when the three come back, that is, after Van's chapter. But you can also go from Ignatius's. (What does Jayden/Cordis do while the three are away). Don't worry about Nu's since I'm gonna make it only within the hospital with Shadow most likely

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@Ciro, hmm... I'll 50/50 it. First half will be before Moryuu wakes and other portion will follow up after the three gentlemen get back then

4 years agoReply

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