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Tenshi no Yami

I always love a long chapter. I would have to backtrack but i think this is your longest one yet. And Im here for it 😁
The gryphon was cool. Can Iggy carry people like that?
@Blankmarks is it possible for Gideon to move Moryuu closer to the others so Vanal can retrieve him?

4 years agoReply

Cheers Tenshi! ^-^
As a griffin Iggy can carry 1-2 people while his energy lasts. 😊

4 years agoReply

I love seeing Ig's transformation. That's a cool ability! I like how Van makes a connection with him, too.

Great job as always! 😁

4 years agoReply

Thanks Ciro! ^-^ Iggy's power up will be shapeshifting after facing his inner demons.
With Van I thought why not, since they are caught in the same situation and come from a similar world. 😁

4 years agoReply

Blankmarks

Great chapter overall Fiona, just need to clarify one thing and ask a question.

1. I might be wrong but I think it was stated last chapter that Vandel is the one that dragged Moryuu back from the explosion, not Gideon.

2. Is it me or did Nu give up that info too easily?

4 years agoReply

@Blankmarks
Oh darn about the first point, I'll correct that, it is Vandal and not Gideon. 😣
As to point 2, it's just a start. I thought Shadow was manipulative enough along surprising her. 🤔 And in the end mention of Magpie's position. Nu will show more restrain in the next chapter.

4 years agoReply

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