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Great fight! I like the team-attack the group tried to do on Ravage ⚔️. I love how she taunts them all the way as well, using her pet names.
Great, fitting music, too!

4 years agoReply

Thanks Ciro! It wasn't easy. Had to fight against many other ideas I had at hand and narrowly escaped a writer's block the other day.
Including, avoiding making Talon create a portal and everyone would be safe at a different location without properly meeting Ravage (similar like in Lord of the Rings story when they could have taken the giant eagles for the journey) 😅😅😅 And the other thing would have been Ravage killing nearly everyone on first encounter.
Love the music, listening to Ravage's theme was getting over time too dark to cope with. 😅😅😅

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

I dont trust kids 😅 especially little pink princesses. We already sidebarred so you know what I think of Ravage and the chapter as a whole, Fiona.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

4 years agoReply

👍 dito can't wait what you will write and the others. 😉

4 years agoReply

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