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Bulbul

"Broken people don't speak with their words"
I totally agree with this!
Btw I love this poem!

2 days agoReply

Felix Flax

Damn that misunderstanding of the last line hits - breaking a deck of cards is what happens before they get shuffled, but in this poem your relationship is what has been shuffled so it hits hard.

2 days agoReply

syzygy

Thanks! (I totally didn't mean to put down "house of cards" lmao)

2 days agoReply

Felix Flax

@syzygy, Hey, what you wrote worked, what you meant also would've worked, that's the beauty of poetry

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