Awesome chapter! 😃 And now getting to meet Talon with a plan.
Can't wait what happenes next and to continue writing. 😊

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Talon trying to shoot his shot had me laughing and my Captain just looked at me like I was crazy 😅 I kinda wanna see the interaction of Talon being blocked by Vandal. Nu seems too nice and perhaps easily flustered if he attempted to flirt.

I too am intrigued by the sun and how this will play out in the shift. I can only infer that we're getting closer to the climax. 

Nicely done, Traveler. 

I like the bloody sun event ☀️ i cant wait  to see and write about the action! Also i'm glad the gang finally gets to meet Talon. 

Great chapter as always, Traveler 👍