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afuy
讚！不過狄更斯那個敘事順序不要改，白紗泛黃要壓到最後，一口氣表現年華老去才有對比效果。
巴爾札克那個也是古早年代的通病，不過牆壁滲出不幸其實以現代限定視角來說是可以的，而以前的作品都用上帝視角，作者自行審判加入主觀詮釋很常見，不算有問題。但是現代的上帝視角就不適合這樣寫，改用限定視角就可以。
3 weeks agoReply
小啾咪
如果墙角能渗出不幸成立，那么渗出快乐，渗出狂喜，渗出平静，就同样成立1

主观诠释要是存在，还要什么语法，文学修饰要是脱离语文，那还学语文干屁？
3 weeks agoReply
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