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Jessica
Wow, this is such an amazing story. Iβve never read a story with this much detail. One of the characters really stood out to me, and I have an interesting thought about them. Would you like to hear it?
Ariana45
I always end up thinking about the chapter long after I've finished reading it, and I think that's one of the best compliments I can give.
Mo
This genuinely made me smile, thank you so much β€οΈπ
Ariana45
@Mo, That's cool! you're welcome, I've some character ideas about your story, wanna know?
Mo
@Ariana45, yes please! I would really like that π
Ariana45
@Mo,Can we discuss on Instagram or discord?Β
Mo
@Ariana45, sure thing! You can add me on discord at (maryamiee)
Ariana45
@Mo,I've send you a friend request on discord, check itΒ
Muhammad Usama
I really enjoyed Isaac's internal monologue. The fact that he knows so much about her from stalking her socials makes every interaction feel a little unsettling in a good way. It kept me engaged throughout the chapter and made me curious to see how far his obsession goes. Great stuff, looking forward to more chapters.
Mo
Look whoβ here! π wow, thank you so much for the encouraging words and your thoughts about the character of Isaac! Iβm excited to share another POV soon so stay tuned ;)
Moonlit_irina
I love the vibe of this date so much, especially the way Isaacβs thoughts slip into the narration, it's witty, a little nervous, and super addicting. My favorite part is when she picks the dessert and heβs like, basically βI know exactly what youβll choose,β because the mind-reading tension is so cute and hilarious.
Mo
Ahhh! Thank you so much, this is a story I came up with on a random afternoon and I was like okay, lets write it so knowing that it is read and appreciated on this platform makes me very happy ππ₯Ί
Moonlit_irina
yeahh I'm obsessed with this :((.Β Thank you for such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :))@Mo,
Mo
@Moonlit_irina, yeah, of course. My insta handle is thatmaryamee πΈ
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