I picked everything from the start! But sometimes i change some things because i notice some inconsistencies in my writing. I don’t really feel like it’s unpredictable tho. Or maybe its just cuz i wrote it lol

Since you already know the story and all the details behind it, I can understand why it might not feel unpredictable to you. I also like that you’re willing to adjust things when you notice inconsistencies  it shows you care about keeping the story connected and making sure everything fits. Do you usually discover those changes while you’re writing a chapter, or do you notice them more when you go back and edit?@S,

@Sarahh1h, i usually check everything before hitting that post button because people might notice them before im able to change it! (Its a publish button but i just call it post)

. Once something is published, readers can notice even the smallest details, so I understand why you like to check everything carefully before posting. It shows how much you care about making your story the best it can be.
Do you usually have a specific editing process before you publish a chapter, like reading it multiple times or checking certain things first?@S,

@Sarahh1h, i usually check them when im still drafting it with simple wording and i write the official text while looking at my draft. Afterwards, i delete the part i already wrote from my draft and check for things that i can change to improve on, such as using fancier wording and/or more descriptive lines. However, i still think i can improve a lot more in writing since i dont feel like my writing can bring the story to life simply by looking at the words. I might be able to find the spirit soon(im young) but for now ill just keep writing. 

I actually think your writing process shows a lot of dedication. Drafting first, then refining the official version, and going back to improve descriptions and wording is a great way to grow as a writer. The fact that you’re already thinking about how to make your words bring the story to life shows that you’re paying attention to the craft, and that’s something that develops with time and practice.I also like that you’re not rushing it and are just continuing to write. By the way, I usually need to open my PC to properly check Penana and reply to messages there, so sometimes I might be slow to respond. Do you have any social media where you share your writing or updates? I’d love to follow you there and it might be easier for us to chat as well
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Yup! I use instagram @heroesandantagonists but PLEASE dont text me there right now cuz it’s currently 3 am and my mom has my phone. @Sarahh1h, I’m using my iPad btw

ok i will send you a follow later just check it  the next day

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do you made characters by yourself?@S,

@Sarahh1h, thank you so much! Im actually so grateful to have engaging readers like you to share my thoughts with! Cuz so far i just keep seeing bots tryna advertise their art for commissions. By the way, did you find my work through a friend’s recommendation or did you just happen to stumble upon it? If its the latter, im so lucky to have a reader like you!

@Sarahh1h, not completely. Some characters are based on real people i know, such as Ryla being my ex-bestfriend with a similar name, The entire FREEDOM ORCHESTRA except Piper being my friends with similar names but slightly different personalities and Veretis being a male version of me (but better). And some other characters, such as Meta Hani are based on my past dance performances. Piper is based on the pied piper of hamelin and the entire cast of the actors are based on the story musicians of bremen. Their powers and names are taken from the fairytale 

@Sarahh1h, also, if you wanna read something that I personally like about my writing (im not trying to be arrogant but it’s one time i genuinely like my own writing a lot) try reading chapter 5! Maybe start from chapter 4 for the background

@Sarahh1h, sorry i only use instagram to self-advertise. And the one i told you is my writer account cuz i wanna stay anonymous XD 

I’ll respect your anonymity, and I’m glad you shared your writer account with me. I enjoy learning about the person and ideas behind the stories, even if you prefer to stay private. What made you decide to start writing under an anonymous account instead of using your personal one?@S,

@Sarahh1h, i only have this account on this platform. But i like staying anonymous because if i ever get famous, which has a tiny tiny tiny tiny tiny chance of becoming true, i wanna focus on my studies instead of having a lot of people asking me how i did this, how i did that. I dont mind answer questions at all, but too many people asking me stuff just gets overwhelming. It’s kinda like exams. They give you a bunch of questions. Except that i can actually express myself without a fixed answer (good thing) when people ask me about my writing stuff. And more importantly, I don’t want any weird stalkers

I actually love hearing the inspiration behind your characters! I don’t think that’s arrogant at all  writers should be able to appreciate the parts of their own work that they’re proud of. 😊 It’s really interesting how you mixed real-life experiences, people you know, and classic fairy tales to create your own characters and world. That usually makes stories feel more personal because there’s a piece of the writer’s own experiences inside them.I’ll definitely check out chapter 4 and chapter 5 when I can. I’m curious to see the part you’re especially proud of! Also, I found your work because I came across it and wanted to learn more about your story and your writing process I enjoy talking with writers and hearing the ideas behind their stories. :) @S,

oky i've send you request on Instagram let's talk further there! :)
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@Sarahh1h, hi, i dont see it