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Moonlit_irina

The part where Ram hears the screaming at 2 AM and actually goes into the forest?? that tension had my heart racing, I was literally holding my breath the whole time. and that ending, "They are coming" followed by complete silence, so chilling and so perfectly done. this story genuinely got under my skin and I love that for it.

4 days agoReply

Lean

Thanks

3 days agoReply

Moonlit_irina

Yeahhh I love it :)), also thank you for
such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your
writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be
comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our
conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :)))@Lean,

3 days agoReply

Lean

@Moonlit_irina,u write your ig handle
I will message you

3 days agoReply

Moonlit_irina

I'm @moonlit_irina there :))@Lean,

3 days agoReply

Sarahh1h

oh very great.By the way, if you’re okay with it maybe we could continue our conversation on another platform, since I’m not very active here and it doesn’t stay logged in on my phone. I keep having to use my PC just to reply. If you’re comfortable and active elsewhere are you on Instagram or Discord so we can keep chatting there?

4 days agoReply

Lean

4 days agoReply

Sarahh1h

Can youh drop me your ig? @Lean,

4 days agoReply

Lean

@Sarahh1h, can u pls if u are comfortable

4 days agoReply

Sarahh1h

where are you from?
@Lean,

4 days agoReply

Sarahh1h

Heres my instagram,
sarahcaaterr
Just tell me when you send me an request so i can accept it as soon as possible @Lean,

4 days agoReply

Lean

@Sarahh1h,i did

4 days agoReply

墨消然

Hi Lean
Your story has a good concept. The Area 51 setting and alien experiment idea are interesting, and the ending feels mysterious and creepy. It also feels very cinematic, almost like I’m reading a novel that plays like a movie in my head.
My suggestion is that you could bring out the horror and mystery atmosphere even more. Maybe add more details like sounds, shadows, rain, silence, and the character’s fear. That would make the story feel more immersive and scarier.
Overall, nice idea. Keep writing!

5 days agoReply

Lean

Thanks
If you want u can check my ig page as well
If you are interested let me know

5 days agoReply

墨消然

@Lean,Sure! I’d like to check it out. You can send me your IG page.

5 days agoReply

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