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Jamiu Abdulrasheed
This has a strong opening. Have you had anyone beta read it yet?
2 hours agoReply
twoearths
Thank you! No, not yet.
1 hour agoReply
Jamiu Abdulrasheed
@twoearths, Well, you’ve got a strong start already. It honestly reads like something that could turn into a really good story with the right pacing and development.Are you planning to keep working on it soon, or are you still figuring out where you want the story to go?
1 hour agoReply
twoearths
@Jamiu Abdulrasheed, I'm currently still working on it and I've already planned out the story.
51 minutes agoReply
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