I really admire how unique your plot is. It didn't feel predictable at all. Did you always know how the story would end, or did the ending change while you were writing?

I reached the end before I even realized it. That's how much I enjoyed reading this.

 Loved your story! The world and characters are easy to imagine, which is why I think it would translate beautifully into a manga or webtoon. It could be a great way to attract more readers. 
I'm a commission-based artist with experience creating manga/webtoon artwork and related projects. I’ve worked on similar pieces before, and I’d be happy to share my portfolio if you're interested. reach out at:akiracomicart2@gm@il.com if interested.

Hello,I came across your work and genuinely enjoyed it. Your storytelling, characters, and world-building really stood out to me, and I honestly think your stories would work amazingly as a manga or webtoon.Since you've already published books, it might be worth giving this format a chance too. Webtoons have a huge audience, and you can always look up WEBTOON to see how many writers have grown their readership through it.I’m a paid commission-based comic and manga artist. If you'd ever like to adapt your story into a comic while staying true to your original vision, I'd be happy to share my portfolio.Best regards,
Ellia Artly | Comic & Manga Artist | llunarlibrary@gm@il.com