Comments - Title: Shadow of the Eternal Flame | Penana

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Comments - Title: Shadow of the Eternal Flame | Penana

Comments - Title: Shadow of the Eternal Flame

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Hi! I recently finished reading your story and wanted to say I really enjoyed it. Your descriptions made the characters and scenes feel incredibly vivid. I'm a freelance commission artist specializing in character art and comic-style illustrations. If you'd ever like to see your story or characters brought to life visually, I'd be happy to chat."That My Inst@(ashbrownn._ ) oR Dis_cord(yunior.brown232483)

2 weeks agoReply

Thank you for your kind words and for describing my story and characters. Well, when the time is right, I'll consider working with you.

2 weeks agoReply

Alright @Void Monarch,

2 weeks agoReply

@Donna ,
This is my username:

v0id_monarch

2 weeks agoReply

I didn"t got any kind of request on insta or discord so if is it possible you can sent me again @Void Monarch,

2 weeks agoReply

@دونا ،
Okay give m your username please

2 weeks agoReply

Insta (ashbrownn._ ) and discord (yunior.brown232483) @Void Monarch,

1 week agoReply

@Donna ,
Okay I sent the request

1 week agoReply

Aright i will check
@Void Monarch,

1 week agoReply

The way you write the characters feels really natural. Which one is your favorite to write?

1 month agoReply

Honestly, even though I'm the writer, this is a difficult question. I love them all, but I'll leave the answer to you and why.

1 month agoReply

@Void Monarch,Just asking rondomly, btw i also
got some visual ideas while reading your story wanna hear?

1 month agoReply

@شيرلين جون ،
Of course

1 month agoReply

Yeah, I really enjoyed this story. The emotions, Khaled’s journey, and the sacrifice of his parents made it feel very meaningful. The way you built the world and introduced Shadow was really interesting, and I’m excited to see how the story develops further.

1 month agoReply

Thank you for your kind words. I'm truly happy that you enjoyed the story, and I promise that the next one will be even better. I will do my best to ensure the story appeals to those who are interested and follow it. Thank you.

1 month agoReply

@Void Monarch, That's nice to hear, I really looking forward to your upcoming updates! I thought of some character ideas for your story, wanna know?

1 month agoReply

@أريانا 45
Of course

1 month agoReply

@Void Monarch, Alright! So, any socials? like discord or insta

1 month agoReply

@أريانا 45
Instagram

1 month agoReply

@Void Monarch, Perfect! that's work

1 month agoReply

The little details you added made the whole chapter feel more alive.

1 month agoReply

For example, can you mention some of those details?

1 month agoReply

@Void Monarch,Instagram?

2 weeks agoReply

@Ariana45,ok

2 weeks agoReply

@Void Monarch,Can you tell me your Instagram username?

2 weeks agoReply

@Ariana45,
v0id_monarch

2 weeks agoReply

@Void Monarch,I've send you a follow request on insta, check it

2 weeks agoReply

@Ariana45,
Okay

2 weeks agoReply

@Ariana45,
I have accepted your request on Instagram

2 weeks agoReply

@Void Monarch,Sure, I've had a look.

2 weeks agoReply

victoria_jhon43

I really enjoyed going through your work. The creativity, dedication, and emotion you bring into your stories make them a pleasure to read. It's always inspiring to come across someone who clearly enjoys what they do and puts so much heart into it. I'm curious, how many years have you been writing?

1 month agoReply

Hello Victoria, thank you for your kind words and I appreciate your enjoyment of the story. By the way, I've been writing for about a year now.

1 month agoReply

victoria_jhon43

@Void Monarch,
oh very nice btw since when you start writing ?

1 month agoReply

@victoria_jhon25 ,
Last year

1 month agoReply

victoria_jhon43

@Void Monarch,
oh very great btw . if you’re okay with it maybe we could continue our conversation on another platform, since I’m not very active here and it doesn’t stay logged in on my phone. I keep having to use my PC just to reply. If you’re comfortable and active elsewhere are you on Instagram or Discord so we can keep chatting there?

1 month agoReply

@victoria_jhon25 , https://instagram.com/v0id_monarch?utm_source=Google.com

1 month agoReply

Okay, I don't mind. This is an Instagram account.

1 month agoReply

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