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Good this story is cool 

but it needs some kind of editing to make it more compelling and awesome I can help you with that.

I'm a beta reader that help author shape their stories with feedback on their manuscript.

I can also help you beta read your stories and give you honest feedback on your manuscript and focus on area of plot, pacing, character and so on to boost your confidence on writing the whole stories before final publishing


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