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I read your story, and I think it was written very well. The storytelling was engaging and nicely done. By the way, how many years have you been writing?I really enjoyed your story. My only suggestion is that the characters and the book cover could be described in more detail. If those aspects were improved, it would feel even more like a complete and professionally written book.If you're comfortable with it, I'd be happy to help you. We can also continue our conversation on another platform if that's easier for you.Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/victoria_.135/Discord: https://discord.com/channels/@me/1507121446739120148Gmail: victoriajohn01212@gmail.comFacebook: https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=61589588442842WhatsApp: +41 78 319 24 53you can message me on any of these platforms.Just mention

This has a strong opening. Have you had anyone beta read it yet?

Your writing has strong word choice, but I noticed one missing detail that could elevate your entire story. Want to hear it? Reach out! Gmail: bookblaze0001@gmail.com | Discord: book_blaze4 | WhatsApp: +44 7529588002 | IG: book_blaze04

Please read and enjoy