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我為九斗米折腰
短文類小說，雖然少了標點符號，但因為字數少，並不影響閱讀，但必定會有人挑標點符號的刺，能的話必須要補上XD。

BL不常看，但我正追著一位叫作小白大的BL，風格跟止大相似，都是用字簡潔派的。

已書籤，等空時來欣賞你的作品=)
4 weeks agoReply
行止
有幾篇沒打到標點符號(嘿嘿) 很感謝你的建議 我會改進的 (其實就前面幾個的劇情發展寫不太出來 後面大概會好一些啦) 
4 weeks agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
@行止,沒事的，喜歡這種短文，可以看很快>"<。
4 weeks agoReply
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