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James

Your story Amazing. Can I suggest something? Contact me now. Whatsapp: +1 4037128372, Discord: yaroslava_empire3 and Instagram: book_blaze04

2 weeks agoReply

Bluemoon Scriptor

... damn. The imagery in this is exquisite. "Candle flickered like guilt..." "whispers travel further than shouts."

Honestly, bravo. You managed to say a lot in 1k words with such poetic rigor.

3 weeks agoReply

ツ Tenzy ツ

Hehe, thanks
Took me quite a while to improve my writing :)

3 weeks agoReply

Bluemoon Scriptor

@ツ Tenzy ツ, your hard work is definitely showing through. Tbh I don't think I could write anything better for this prompt.

2 weeks agoReply

ツ Tenzy ツ

@Bluemoon Scriptor, don't you dare say such. You obviously have more experience than me, you can do way better!

2 weeks agoReply

LunaBee

I love this! It's so impactful, the way it's worded combined with the story! You are a truly amazing writer.

3 weeks agoReply

ツ Tenzy ツ

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :))

3 weeks agoReply

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