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freya_the_official
I read your story and I genuinely liked it very much. I believe this story truly deserves to be published. If you prefer, we can discuss ideas together. This is my Instagram: freya_the_official, my Discord: freya_the_official1, and here is my email: freyatheofficial@outlook.com
57 minutes agoReply
Evelyn Taylor
Hey dude, I just read your story and WOW πŸ”₯ my brain legit went into full cinema mode while reading, like I could literally see the scenes playing out lol.
I’m actually an artist, and I usually do commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art and Cover Art. And honestly? Your story as a comic or webtoon would be NEXT LEVEL!
I’d be super hyped to bring it to life visually (no pressure at all, just thought it would be super dope). If you’re even a little curious or wanna check out my art, hit me up on Discord (eve_verse). Can’t wait to hear what you think abt the idea!
Regards,Evelyn
2 weeks agoReply
josephcarea
Your storytelling stands out, but there’s something missing that could make it even stronger. Interested? Connect with me! Gmail: bookblaze0001@gmail.com | Discord: book_blaze4 | WhatsApp: +44 7529588002 | IG: book_blaze04
2 weeks agoReply
abella234
Your point of view is excellent, and I truly enjoyed your narrative. By the way, do you share your work on any other platforms so I can easily follow up there?
1 month agoReply
Emelia James
My favourite scene is when Koha accidentally reveals his true power during orientation the moment the hall fills with light, the glacial spire forms, and everyone freezes in awe. Was that moment meant to show his magic breaking past human limits, or also the beginning of others seeing the gentleness behind his overwhelming strength?
2 months agoReply
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