Here's the my beta reading feedback:The Good: You clearly care about your readers. That's not fake. You're trying to make sure nobody feels lost coming into Book 3, and that's a solid move. The bones of the story are interesting genie twist, popularity wish gone weird, betrayal by the popular girl. There's meat here.
Where It Gets Fuzzy:First, you're burying the lede. The most interesting thing in this entire summary is the last line: "he's surprised to realize that it's Jen, not Megan, who's holding the bottle." That's your hook. That's the "oh shit" moment. But you delivered it flat, like you're reading a grocery list. This moment should land like a punch. Jen has his bottle now. That's not just a detail that's the entire power dynamic of Book 3 shifting. Own it.
Second, "meaningful friendship" tells me nothing. What makes it meaningful? Did he save her from something? Did she see him vulnerable? "Meaningful" is a summary word. In the actual writing, you need a scene that makes me feel that meaning.
Third, pacing in the summary is uneven. You spend equal time on random dinner convos with parents and the actual bottle theft. The dinner? Fine, whatever. The theft? That's your inciting incident. That should pulse.
The Fix For Next Time:
When you write summaries whether for readers or query letters hit the emotional turning points. Don't just list events. Make me feel why each one matters.

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Hey, not gonna lie, but your story just caught me off guard. It was just amazing. While reading, I honestly felt like I was watching the scenes playing out. The drama, the moments, it all fit in like it’s already a comic script waiting to be drawn.
I’m a commission artist, and I specialize in taking stories like yours and turning them into comics/webtoons. When I say your story has potential, I mean it could look incredible if it was made into a comic.
If you’re ever down or want to check out some of my work, feel free to hit me up on Discord (eve_verse).
Regards,Evelyn

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