The way you built that whole chase scene with Leyton's bullying bravado and then had that mysterious girl stop his punch with one finger was such a perfect power shift, and "I don't like weak men" delivered with that cold smile gave me chills.
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
Here are my all other platforms:  
Twitter: WinterKatie3Insta: winterkatie687Email: winterkatie687@gmail.comDiscord: winterkatie

 Loved your story! The world and characters are easy to imagine, which is why I think it would translate beautifully into a manga or webtoon. It could be a great way to attract more readers. 
I'm a commission-based artist with experience creating manga/webtoon artwork and related projects. I’ve worked on similar pieces before, and I’d be happy to share my portfolio if you're interested. reach out at:akiracomicart2@gm@il.com if interested.

Hi  What genre do you enjoy writing the most?🥰btw I analyzed your work, and I think it has a very unique and engaging storytelling style. The way you present your ideas and emotions really stands out.

You crafted a strong narrative. There’s just one missing detail that could elevate it dramatically. Curious? Let’s chat! Gmail: bookblaze0001@gmail.com | Discord: book_blaze4 | WhatsApp: +44 7529588002 | IG: book_blaze04

Hello,

I hope this message finds you well! I recently had the
pleasure of exploring your captivating story, and I must say it left a lasting
impression. Your narrative is both rich and compelling, and I believe it would
translate beautifully into comic art. As a commission artist specializing in
adapting literary works into dynamic comic formats, I see great potential in
bringing your story to a wider audience through this medium. I would be
delighted to work with you on this project. If you're interested, I’d love for
you to review my portfolio, where you can see how I transform stories into
visually engaging art. I look forward to discussing this further and hearing
your thoughts.



Feel free to connect with me on Discord or through my social media:


Discord:
Gancalo.morata
Twitter:
@GotGancalo
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Email:
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Thank you for considering this opportunity. I genuinely hope
to hear from you soon!

Warm regards,

Jessica