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stellareed1

I can tell you’ve spent time figuring out what works for your writing. Has your approach to creating stories changed compared to when you first started?

2 weeks agoReply

TwilightGod

Not quite....if you were about this story plot then I can a quick spoiler alert ...the main character was a betrayed angel whi was discarded by own homeland eden and fall into corruption by stripping him from all his authority and divine powers of a angel ..he went to the demon realm with a burning desire in his eyes that he will destroy both eden and demon realm whom he disliked so much and that very who refuses to accept and betrayed his trust that he spent his whole life for them.

1 week agoReply

stellareed1

@TwilightGod ,That’s actually a really interesting direction for the story. The whole fall-from-grace angle and the character’s anger and betrayal give it a lot of emotional weight. It sounds like you’ve put quite a bit of thought into his motives too. What inspired you to make him turn against both realms like that?

1 week agoReply

TwilightGod

@stellareed1,i want to create betrayed and corrupted who will rewrite the entire world.

Also,there is secret plot twists both eden and demon realm doing something that's against his ideals and principles.

6 hours agoReply

stellareed1

@TwilightGod Honestly, that makes the story sound even more interesting. I like that the betrayal isn’t just there for shock value, but actually connects to Eden’s character and his desire to rewrite the world. The secret twists involving both realms going against their own ideals could add a lot of depth too. What kind of changes do you imagine Eden making to the world once he gets the power to rewrite it?

6 hours agoReply

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