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David Shyu
Hey! Thank you so much for your kind words; I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story!To answer your question, this is actually only my second story. I honestly started out just wanting to write a simple tale and turn it into an animation, but as I kept going, it just kept growing into something much bigger. I've only been writing for about two years now, so getting this kind of feedback means the world to me!
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David Shyu
Hi! Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words!If I had to choose, my two favorite parts to write were:Maya's confession: Writing that scene felt very powerful because it was the moment she could finally let go of all her suppressed fears, share her deep secret, and truly express what she had been carrying inside for so long.The return to Redwater: The ending—where A.M.O.S. and Annie finally step down from their duties and formally "hand over" Maya to Luke—was also deeply emotional and meaningful for me to write.Thanks again for your wonderful support. It means the world to me!
1 month agoReply

David Shyu
Hi! Thank you so much for your wonderful message! It truly means the world to me as someone who has spent over thirty years in education, watching artificial intelligence transition from science fiction into everyday reality made me ponder a core question: When AI can do almost everything, what is the ultimate value of being human?I wanted to write a story that explores this tension—not just through the lens of a macro-society grappling with automation, but through the intimate, quiet corners of a family. Beneath the cold algorithms and the heavy pressures of the era, I wanted to show how genuine love, sacrifice, and human resilience still find a way to shine.Thank you again for reading and for connecting so deeply with the characters. It’s readers like you that make storytelling such a magical journey!
1 month agoReply

stellareed2
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and I honestly loved it. The way you brought the characters and emotions to life made the whole experience so enjoyable. There was something really special about the way everything unfolded. What made you decide to write this particular story?
1 month agoReply

David Shyu
Diana01 - Hey! Your story is really amazing. I enjoyed it so much, and reading it made my mood feel refreshed. Your writing style is truly impressive. By the way, can I ask you something? Who was the first person who inspired you to start writing?
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