I recently came across your story "Geese in the Clouds" and wanted to reach out to say how much I enjoyed the opening! The setup with Dhatri's hyper-masculine worldview immediately crashing into Leutik's calm, deadpan presence is hilarious and intriguing. The dialogue feels sharp (especially that “Hey, princess” line and Leutik’s zero-reaction comeback), and I’m already curious to see how Dhatri’s “sanity on the line” situation unfolds.It’s a really fresh take on the forced-proximity/roommate trope with strong character contrast right from the first scene. Thank you for sharing it. I’ve added it to my reading list and I’m looking forward to the next updates.Wishing you the best with your writing, and I hope you continue the story!Warm regards / Best wishes.
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