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KiaraJohn

This is actually crazy good 😭

Mirror scene? instant chills. Ink on skin? wild concept. Feels like a dark Netflix intro fr. Eli showing up = tension boost Keep it messy, keep it mysterious. This is hitting.

1 week agoReply

adeelgr8

Looks mysterious and horror filled beginning. The start is quite engaging and if you are able to keep the momentum going, you will definitely get lots of reads.

1 week agoReply

venomSketch

Eli feeling the pressure of her writing and showing up breathless while the streetlights die is the most terrifyingly romantic thing I have read. well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
Here are my all other platforms: Twitter: WinterKatie3 Insta: winterkatie687 Email: winterkatie687@gmail.com Discord: winterkatie

2 weeks agoReply

Angelina_Hugan

Hey,
I stumbled upon your story and genuinely enjoyed it. Your writing is incredibly visual, and it instantly made me think how great it would look as a comic or webtoon.
I’m a commissioned comic/manga artist and would love to collaborate by creating visuals inspired by your story, if that’s something you’d be open to. No pressure at all.
You can contact me on Discord (aangelinaa._) or Instagram (angelinaaalove_).
Best,Angelina

4 months agoReply

EilishReads

This was genuinely gripping, your imagery is so vivid, especially the ink etched into the skin and the notebook “breathing.” The tension builds really well and that ending gave me chills. If you’re ever open to it, I’d be happy to give thoughtful feedback on pacing, clarity, and character moments. Really enjoyed reading this

4 months agoReply